As far as I am concerned the animation itself is OK since you did actually put in a good deal of work into this as Ozone has said. Acknowledging this what I am glad about is that you gave Rebecca and Joe credit otherwise that could have been somewhat problematic. So rather than criticizing that this is a fan animation with audio ripped from the original movie itself I'm going to focus more on the animation itself.
But WHAT Does keep me from liking the piece all together is that the animation does look like it's stiff. Assuming that this is your first animation there's nothing wrong with that in a sense but as you develop see if you can study other animations frame by frame, look at the frames and how they are drawn and maybe even consider picking up the animators survival kit when you get the chance to. I think that can help your animations get smoother as you develop as an animator.
Thank you! And yes i'm trying to improve! Ever since this animation i now animate in 24 fps instead of 12 for more smoother motions
Typically when I see an artist take a risk it usually benefits the art. In this case the art goes into the subject matters of suicide, death, and the afterlife.
There is a sense of emotion that is portrayed throughout the short where you actually sense that there is a deep underlying issue within the main character. Like something is off and her emotions are depressed and on the surface she just seems like another person where she seems happy. Then she takes the leap and that's where it hits the audience in the gut when they grasp the reality of what's happening.
It's a sensitive topic no one likes to talk about. I personally feel that you managed to achieve something that couldn't be shown in words otherwise. I also very much like the animation style of this as well.
Thanks CaptainDioShiba !
I could have named that film " leap of faight" hah !
A Beeautiful masterpiece, I actually enjoyed the buzz in this film than I had the original Dr. Bees.
I really hope that you continue these shorts in the future, they're becoming pretty entertaining.
Dude, this is amazing.
Like I can just sit down and chill out to this and imagine that I'm overlooking some field. I like how you executed this song bro.
I appreciate that man.. I'm going to post some new stuff soon! So much material so little time!!
Honestly, I love the melody and the beat that this song uses. It's also pretty relaxing to listen to and somehow I can almost visualize something rather beautiful with it.
I like it, to me this is kind of one of those bubbly songs that can just cheer you up. I know it's dance music and all but it just has that kind of quality to it, and yet it feels different.
Definitely dank as hell too on so many levels!
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